The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a lot of cars on British road and they have increased day to day. By the year 2000 these may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. In
this
essay, I intend to examine, about the solutions of these problems.
Firstly
, the people living in Britain need to think about themselves. If they used the bus and train
instead
of their
car
,
this
problem would resolve a little. Because of
this
, the British Government should introduce to control
car
ownership and use.
For example
, the government can ban to enter the road by
car
in the someday all family from a house.
Secondly
, the buses and trains of government should be free for public population.
Thus
, the people would use these transport vehicles
instead
of their own
car
. After that, the roads in Britain would be safer and more comfortable.
Lastly
, the number of cars that are exported from another country should decrease and the prices of
car
should increased in case they aren't overcrowded.
For example
, the prices of cigarettes increased and the consumption of cigarettes went down. In conclusion, if these measures put into action the problem of traffic can be decreased in the British roads.
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