Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am writing to

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request you don't build on the parking place of the garden. I am Inderpal, a member of

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Society. It's been more than a couple of years that I have been living in a society. The park plays a prominent role, not only in the child's life

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but

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people, as both groups of generation are freebies. They have an only area to sit and relax in the evening.

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, it must have a greenery neighbourhood around us in order to stay fit as well as healthy. Despite being busy, people manage to walk in the garden

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their convenience. As far as an alternative solution is

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concerned, the council considers an idea of building

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underground parking just similar to other societies are being used by neighbour societies. The other solution, an area which is free and, available in front of a society's main gate; the council can buy that zone for the parking. Eventually, I would request you to consider my solutions

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of building the parking in a place of the park. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Inderpal