Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at an earlier age. • Do you agree or disagree? • Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is a view that it is

unproper

not suitable or right or appropriate

improper

to set common retirement age, without taking into account the working conditions of

employee

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employment

. In

this

case the pilots and mining workers and other

indviduals

a human being

individuals

with

severe working enviroment

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a severe working environment

severe working environment

should have the different pension scheme, which will allow them to

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

pension at

earlier age

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an earlier age

earlier ages

. It's clear that some professions cause greater risks for mental and physical health.

For instance

, people who work in factories, during their production process a considerable number of toxic substances are exude

.

Accept space

.

Moreover

, certain occupations include physical power and senior people usually unable to do

same amount

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the same amount

of job as they did when they are

were

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being

younger. Particularly, civil aviation

engeener

a person who uses scientific knowledge to solve practical problems

engineer

or cardio surgeon

have

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has

more responsibilities and duties than

simple office worker

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the simple office worker

a simple office worker

. On another hand, it's

extremly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

hard to choose

criterias

a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

criteria

for "hard occupation" because of the each job

require

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requires

unique skills and

talants

natural abilities or qualities

talents

.

In other

words every

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words, every

profession has some features which are hard to commit. The simple task

such

as cleaning might be considerably

tough

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tougher

to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

for some individual due to his personal qualities.

Finally

, we should take into account the conditions of work, because as each of us

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

different salary which

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different salaries, which

different salaries which

a different salary which

depends on the contribution to the

common wealth

the official name of some states in the United States (Massachusetts and Pennsylvania and Virginia and Kentucky) and associated territories (Puerto Rico)

commonwealth

, so the pension age should be determined

according their job

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according to their job

.