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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Sometimes, employers ask job applicants for their personal information,
such
 as what they do in their free time, religion, and their marriage status. While some might say
this
 is necessary and useful, others disagree. The essay will discuss all perspective and give the writer's opinion. In
this
 time of data, privacy is important to everyone. Those who opposed giving their personal information value their privacy more than others. Some might have eccentric interests or religion and do not feel comfortable to share those details with others.
For example
, people who are bisexuals might be afraid to be judged if they show their sexual interest and marriage status in
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 country.
On the other hand
,
majority
Suggestion
the majority
 of people say personal data is important for the safety of the company and yourself. In case of emergency,
such
 as you are
unconcious
not conscious; lacking awareness and the capacity for sensory perception as if asleep or dead
unconscious
 or dead. The employers know who to contact or if no relatives are found, the body will be operated in the proper way according to the religion you filled. In conclusion, while there are convincing arguments on both sides, the importance of privacy overshadow the safety. I believe that people should be able to decide what personal information they want others to know and what they don't. And everyone should feel comfortable living in
this
 world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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