You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flatmates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that the hot

water

system has been issued since I moved into

this

condo which is located on 18 Goldens st, Brington, Toowoomba

last

winter. The boiler has been fixed by a professional mechanic whom you contacted but the problem is that the hot

water

system is not completely fixed at all.

Few

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weeks ago, I was trying to take a shower and turned on the

water

. While I took a shower, I noticed that the how

water

was not running properly and I must’ve finished washing with freezing cold

water

in a hurry. Sometimes, there is leaking

water

from the main pipe which is linked to the hot

water

boiler. There was

this

one time that I was almost slippery and hurt my

back bone

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at

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in

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shower

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the shower

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room because of leaking

water

here and there. I am so frustrated and anxious about living in

this

unsafe environment and feel very uncomfortable

to pay

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an expensive rent fee without any luxurious housing facilities. I am entitled to request that you can make me move to other personal properties with well-managed housing facilities, especially a hot

water

system or offer me a cheaper price of rent until

this

issue is fixed successfully. I look forward to hearing a prompt response as soon as possible.

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Your

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faithfully, Meghan Kim