You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flatmates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that the hot
water
system has been issued since I moved into
this
condo which is located on 18 Goldens st, Brington, Toowoomba
last
winter. The boiler has been fixed by a professional mechanic whom you contacted but the problem is that the hot
water
system is not completely fixed at all.
Few
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weeks ago, I was trying to take a shower and turned on the
water
. While I took a shower, I noticed that the how
water
was not running properly and I must’ve finished washing with freezing cold
water
in a hurry. Sometimes, there is leaking
water
from the main pipe which is linked to the hot
water
boiler. There was
this
one time that I was almost slippery and hurt my
back bone
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at
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in
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shower
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the shower
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room because of leaking
water
here and there. I am so frustrated and anxious about living in
this
unsafe environment and feel very uncomfortable
to pay
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an expensive rent fee without any luxurious housing facilities. I am entitled to request that you can make me move to other personal properties with well-managed housing facilities, especially a hot
water
system or offer me a cheaper price of rent until
this
issue is fixed successfully. I look forward to hearing a prompt response as soon as possible.
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Your
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faithfully, Meghan Kim
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