You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flatmates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
#student #english #language #school #brighton #accommodation #flatmates #water #time #landlord’s #workmen #success #landlord #reason #risk #action
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that the hot water
system has been issued since I moved into this
condo which is located on 18 Goldens st, Brington, Toowoomba last
winter. The boiler has been fixed by a professional mechanic whom you contacted but the problem is that the hot water
system is not completely fixed at all.
Few
weeks ago, I was trying to take a shower and turned on the Change the article
A few
water
. While I took a shower, I noticed that the how water
was not running properly and I must’ve finished washing with freezing cold water
in a hurry. Sometimes, there is leaking water
from the main pipe which is linked to the hot water
boiler. There was this
one time that I was almost slippery and hurt my back bone
Correct your spelling
backbone
at
Change preposition
in
shower
room because of leaking Correct article usage
the shower
water
here and there.
I am so frustrated and anxious about living in this
unsafe environment and feel very uncomfortable to pay
an expensive rent fee without any luxurious housing facilities.
I am entitled to request that you can make me move to other personal properties with well-managed housing facilities, especially a hot Change the verb form
paying
water
system or offer me a cheaper price of rent until this
issue is fixed successfully.
I look forward to hearing a prompt response as soon as possible.
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Meghan KimCorrect your spelling
Yours
Submitted by SammyPAW TV on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!