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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Increasing crime may cause many consequences among the nation,
Also
 many people makes debate on that.Some people deem that by giving long term jail may minimize
this
 phenomenon, While other believes that rehabilitation can
also
 help to reduce the ratio.
However
, I will discuss both views and assert my opinion in the end.
To begin
 with, giving
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
prison
 sentence may decrease the chances of re-offend the crime.As, many offenders repeat the crime for taking the revenge.
Moreover
, some time long term
prison
also
 causes several mental problems.
As a result
, many of them committed suicide.
Furthermore
, Sometimes offenders may realise their offend and want to
change
 their
life
,
Accept space
,
But lengthy
prison
 sentence may not give a chance to
change
 their
life
.
For instance
, a report generated by 'Tihad Jail' in India shows that about 60% criminals who are on longer
prison
 sentences committed suicide because they were not getting a
second
 chance to restructure their
life
Suggestion
lives
.
On the other hand
, The government should try to develop rehabilitation centres in
prison
,
Thus
 it may help offenders to
change
 their
life
 and become respected individual of the Society.
Moreover
, providing some skills development training in
prison
 may build some useful skills, Which, ultimately, helps them to find a good job.
For example
, a report published by 'Times of India' shows that around 40% criminals working in multinational company's as a respected position because of the skills which they learn in
prison
. In conclusion, From my point of view criminals are part of society. They deserved to be punished for what they did, But, giving
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
prison
 sentence may not give them a
second
 chance to
change
 their
life
instead
 of that by giving a right direction from rehabilitation may help them to become respected individual of the society.
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