In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

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Developing skills
at
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in
the workplace has become mandatory in
21st century
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the 21st century
, while some conservative commentators strongly believe that, to excel in professional career every employer should have multitasking skills. In the same way,
employer
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the employer
an employer
employers
should have good communal skills and higher education to upgrade his position at
workplace
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the workplace
. In
this
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essay, I will demonstrate both communal
and excellent
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and, excellent
s to excel in his role with some examples.
Firstly
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, due to heavy competition in job search, recently, all professional hiring consultancies started
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to
look for candidates who have communal skills.
Communal
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Communing
skills which exhibits your ability to bring more customer for the business.
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, it helps to develop
good relationship
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good relationships
a good relationship
between company and customer.
For example
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, a recent study in Human and Health Resource from the university of Melbourne shows that, companies like Ford, Microsoft, and Mac Donald's showed
45 percent increase
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a 45 percent increase
in their business when employers show good communal skills with their clients.
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, it is important that every employer should develop communal skills for the benefit of their professional career.
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, an excellent degree from
university
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the university
will give additional weight to your resume.
The higher
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The highest
qualification will lead you to see more opportunities
at
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in
the workplace. There are few roles in the industry
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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