The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believed that women in society nowadays has seen differently from the past two decades because of the belief that juvenile delinquency which is

happened

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happening

in youngsters recently is

effect

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the effect

an effect

of the bad parenting practice caused by working mothers. I consider myself to stand against

this

perspective. Caring for children in the house is not only

mother’s role

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a mother’s role

the mother’s role

but

also

father

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the father

a father

. In a family, both of father and

mother

has

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have

their own

role

Accept comma addition

role, such

such

as father earning more money to support

family

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the family

a family

financially and

mother

managing money effectively. But, in order to nurture children is both responsibilities.

Father’s role

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A father’s role

The father’s role

is important to discipline the children, strengthen their mentality, and teach them how to act appropriately in the society.

Mother’s love

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A mother’s love

is fundamental to soften children’s soul so that they know how to act as a human being in a proper

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

.

On the other hand

, I believe that career women can be

reminded

recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection

remembered

as a trusted and responsible

mother

in their house.

For instance

, I have a teacher who runs a ton of tutor classes in a language academy. As I know, she had been taught in my school for fifteen years old since she was younger. She

teaches

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has taught

every day in our school since 08.00 am to 03.00 pm and continues in

language academy

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a language academy

until 07.30 pm and she still can manage her family well. Her

first

daughter is a well behave and a brilliant girl in her school, while her son is active in soccer club. To sum up, in my opinion, women can be career women and still remain as a good

mother

. Even though juvenile delinquency can be influenced by bad parenting practice, it is not the only reason.