Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/helath club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the most controversial today relates to
consumption
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consume
consumes
more and more sugar-based drinks. In the following paragraphs, some reasons which lead to
this
worrying trend will be discussed, and possible solutions to tackle it will
also
be suggested.
To begin
with, some predominant causes are resulting in the above-mentioned scenario.
First
of all, these days there are a large number of advertisements on TV and social media. Take Pepsi and
Cocacola
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Coca Cola
as an example, there are scores of marketing in a public place
such
as supermarkets, schools, and bus stops. These beverage companies offer advertisements not only using eye-catching images of their
products but
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products, but
also
providing healthy ingredients prove to be good for the consumers' health. That may boost sales due to the attraction of people, especially children who would consume more sugary drinks.
Additionally
, in today's hectic society, working parents are too busy, they have less time to prepare proper meals for their family,
thus
, they take fast food as a solution. People,
hence
, have fast food and sugar-sweetened, which made them addicts, beverages because of its convenience and reasonable price. The turnover,
consequently
, of sugar-based drinks increased.
As a result
, it inevitably leads to boost sales of these fizzy drinks companies.
Nevertheless
, some feasible measures can be put into practice to prevent
this
phenomenon from being worse. A good idea is to impose a heavy tax on sugar-based beverages and when the price increase, buyers will reduce the needs for these unhealthy drinks. Another possibility is the limit advertisements of beverage companies that are directly targeted at children and young customers. By far the most obvious solution is the government should encourage more programs, billboards, and posters that educate on healthy eating and the health risks associated with excessive consumption of beverages with added sugar or other sweeteners
such
as diabetes and obesity. As a consequence, people may pay
great
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greater
attention to their food intake. In conclusion, from the
afore-mentioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
discussion, advertising and the lack of education are the primary reasons contributing to having more and more sugary beverages.
Therefore
, it is high time these mentioned-measures should be implemented to address
this
issue.
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