You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about the purchase of some electrical goods from your shop.I am a resident in

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village.I have come to know from a friend of mine that your shop has some of the best electronic goods in

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locality I am looking to buy Laptop with a configuration of 8 GB RAM, 1 TB space with the latest windows version.

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, Keyboard, Bluetooth enabled speakers and a microphone. As I am an online tutor these are essential for me

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and looking to buy superior quality items as my existing ones are in a bad position. Could you help me if these are available in your store or can you place an order for the same

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It would be great if you can send me the details of the variants and prices for the same.

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, wanted to check how many days can you hold the goods for me. Thanks for assisting in the process. Yours faithfully, Sumanth

sumoSun Jun 28 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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