People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
Nowadays,
sugar
-based drink
are believed to become so popular that the quantity of people, who drink
them, increase significantly. However
, according to the research of some famous scientists in the world, coke has many bad effects on our health
physically and mentally. Therefore
, we should have such
a positive improvement in people's awareness that can help make their health
well and keep body fit.
Firstly
, sugar
-based drinks, particularly reduce thirst
and hunger because of the amount of sugar
, which is one of the most essential ingredients, is especially high in those drinks such
as Coca Cola, Pepsi. Not only can they help us get out of thirst
, but also
they are able to provide such
a huge amount of permanent energy that if we are extremely tired, the solution will be a drink
of Coca Cola, for sure. As a consequence, they are definitely ordered in parties because of the convenience and comfort. For these reasons, I absolutely agree with the unexpected fame of sugar
- based all over the world.
However
, drinking too much drinks, which are particularly high in the amount of sugar
, badly affects to our health
or lifestyle. Therefore
, we had better know how to reduce them right away and one of the most important ways is drinking enough two litres of mineral water a day to decrease dramatically feelings of thirst
. Hence
, doing more exercises in leisure time to lower our pressure is also
the most well- known tips to make our hobbies better. Moreover
, having more vegetables in meals and sleeping enough from seven to eight hours a day will totally give such
a great result that we have never expected. Subsequently
, we must carefully and cautiously notice what to eat and what to drink
, not being naughty or angry at something that is
not especially important because emotions are also
the factors affect to our ways not to have sugar
-based drinks.
In conclusion, I definitely think that reducing thirst
is one of the most essential factors of coke to be famous. Nevertheless they
are good, permanent, they do not help help our Accept comma addition
Nevertheless, they
health
for a long period of time. In addition
, eating and drinking healthy is in the abilities of decreasing the range of people drinking sugar
- based drinks.Submitted by 10A1 - 29 Võ Ngọc Hoàng Sang on
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