The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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bride
dress to the party and the cake itself. All Change noun form
bride's
this ritual
is considered worthless, Fix the agreement mistake
these rituals
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expensive; Correct your spelling
and
therefore
, they are lost cash.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however
I feel that parties are needed in our life. Add a comma
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is because they make us happy and give us a reason to socialize and interact with each other.Submitted by Ana on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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