Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is a fact that nowadays, a lot of children we see are addicted to

computers

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the gigantic number of

games

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, and they hardly

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time for outdoor activities. There are a lot of reasons to bolster

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view, and some visible influences too. Both

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aspects are explained in

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paragraph. Discussing the reasons, the most common one is keeping the young at home is the availability of

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.

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is because

computers

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are very cheap these days and almost every house has one,

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make

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them computer freak since many

games

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’ software are

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built

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computer and they can play unlimited version of the same game. The other cause is parents avoid children they feel if they are busy with

computers

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, they can do other household stuff.

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, they never bother to see, what they are doing

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Or how many hours they are spending. By

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this

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I mean that they never

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pushed by them to spare time for some physical work or sports which is entirely necessary for them.

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average a child takes 6 hours of sleep and

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6 hours

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school,

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they spend on technology for playing

games

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.

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, they become addicted and feel outdoor

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are tiring and require a lot of

efforts

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. The mentioned causes have some potential impacts too. The first in foremost effect is seen with their eyes, they often

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for

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eye pain which is

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excessive use of electronic

screen

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. The other repercussion is obesity since

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no body movement is involved.

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to

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many

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pass by depression, since they isolate

them self

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themself

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in one room and do not interact with anyone may lead to mental problems.

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, my nephew got spectacles and when he tested his doctor said its so weak that he

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lose his eyesight, it was all started with excessive use of laptops and he was so addicted to

games

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that he

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started his own YouTube

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blogger.

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, it's true to say that it's dangerous since its

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on human health is deadly.

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the topic, it can be

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commented that

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of

computers

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has detrimental effects if not used in a balanced way. So, we should galvanize our children to participate more in outdoor activities and

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is possible when we put our efforts and time

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them.