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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some believe that having a permanent
job
 is more important than enjoy a
job
. Others
thinks
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think
have thought
are thought
are thinking
 that
job
 satisfaction is more important than
job
 security. In my opinion, I concur with the latter idea which I will explore in following essay.
First
, people who enjoy their jobs have more motivation of learning the skills and knowledges relate the jobs. As the result, they have the ability to improve their output. Take myself as
example
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an example
, I am a data engineer and I do love my
job
. I have to use some skills like data mining, statistic, programming… etc.
to
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To
 do business
analyze
someone who is skilled at analyzing data
analyst
analyses
.
Hence
, I take some online courses, read some essays and practice by myself in my free
time
.
Therefore
, I can improve my output of
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
analyses
, meanwhile I enjoy the process of learning.
Second
, the process of working will be more meaningful to people who enjoy their
job
. So that, they have
passion
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a passion
on
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for
 working and willing to pay more
time
 and effort on their
job
. It can make people more productive.
For instance
, I have an artist friend who
really like
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really likes
 painting. He
always working
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always works
is always working
 over 8 hours a day just due to he
enjoy
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enjoys
 it and forget the
time
.
As a result
, he has many creations and quality improve all the
time
.
On the other hand
,
job
 security which can
also
 represent the stable income may be another important factor
to
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for
 some people. If someone has to support a family, raise children and afford other more responsibilities, permanent
job
 may be his or her
first
 consider. To conclude,
job
 satisfaction can improve the quality of output and make people be productive.
However
,
job
 security may
also
 be important to some people. If people can find
permanent
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a permanent job
job
 and enjoy it, it will be the best result.
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