improvement in the health , education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. however, the govt of the richer nation should take more responsibility for the helping the poorer nation in such area

In Today's highly competitive world, poorer nations are struggling for enhancements in medical
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education and trade for their development.
Nevertheless
, it should be better for them if richer nation's authority supports
such
under developing countries. I partially agree with
this
opinion because of some reasons.
First
and foremost thing, developed nation has surpassed supply of these resources. So, sharing of them is affordable. Many rich nations doing their bit in helping poor nations
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For instance
, recently the American
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government union
donated around 33 billion dollars in welfare of African backward people and areas. But being dependent on rich nations for development is not good for developing nations.
Secondly
, many developing nations striving hard to make improvements in these sectors like India had a literacy rate of 41% in 2000 but, according to the 2015 reports it was 78%. On the flip side, support from rich countries will make their own people feel bad and they think that the authorities are not using funds for their own progress. Recently, a campaign was introduced by England local citizens to stop funding for poor nations. So,
ministry
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the ministry
has to stop
such
help.
Furthermore
, richer nation's power should open door for foreign and for imports.
Then
, they can
also
provide scholarship to students poorer nationally to study in their country's universities. So
,
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,
these steps are realistic and many rich nations are following in
this
these nations can provide a relief for poorer nations in terms of development. To conclu
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