Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

Many parts of the society preserve the duties of childcare left to the women, though men are equally capable of doing the same.

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argue that the purpose of a woman's life should be having a

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and take care of them rather than pursuing a career.I thoroughly disagree with

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statement due to the financial independence of women is much needed in the modern economic terms

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leaving the Job just for looking after the children would not be an ideal option. Predominantly

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all conventional community left the responsibility to nurture the children to women than men and consider it should only belong to a woman

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Persubaly, mothers are benevolent in nature and carrying their baby's prenatal they are more affectionate towards their

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,having said that, many new studies prove that the determining factor of love hormones oxytocin releasing at the same level for

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mother and father

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we cannot say that only mothers are affectionate and capable of childcare.

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contemporary era,

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men and women are career driven due to the financial needs and

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women are far more educated than previous decades

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they cannot just leave the Work life just to look after the babies ,Since,

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men and women are getting paternity and maternity paid leaves respectively to look after the

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it will alter the traditional concept of society in the long run.

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in many developed countries,

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the parent taking responsibility to look after the

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the standard of living is high compared to the women who is living in the country where the common mentality has an aversion to accept the Career enthusiasts women.

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leads to the endorsement of male dominance in the society with will eventually feed the children they raise. In conclusion,

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many argue that women need to leave the job for

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care since community forced them to be quintessential mothers ,in my opinion, it would not be a good practise to leave the Job since the world needs more participation from women and especially it is vital to empower the women to thrive in

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modern day family system.