Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Watching TV is preferred by many kids day by day. Yet, Idiot box cannot substitute the book as a studying resource. That's why they are not getting enough education. In recent years, more and more children are choosing

watching

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to watch

TV

instead

of doing

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

activities. In

this

way, they are getting a lot of advantages to increase their knowledge and they

also getting

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are also getting

also get

lots of disadvantages. The role of TUBE is making youngsters clear, well-

knowladgeable

highly educated; having extensive information or understanding

knowledgeable

and even genius from their childhood.

Particularly they

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Particularly, they

can learn other languages

easy with confidence

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with easy confidence

and they can learn fast and qualitatively with subtitles and captions while watching TV programs, broadcasts and shows especially associated with science and subject. Thanks

for

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to

internet

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the internet

, students can get more information, lots of knowledge and even the news that associated with

study

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the study

. Nowadays schools and colleges and universities and other educational places are closing due to COVID-19 is wide spread. And Students are using television as watching their lessons.

However we

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However, we

have to pay attention another site of the watching television. It includes a couch potato who

is sit

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is sitting

has sat

sits

in front of Idiot Box and spend a great deal of time for watching it.

Besides

, there are many problems which are acts of terror, bloodshed and violence and so on. Showing

this kinds

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this kind

these kinds

of actions can give very bad effect on their psychology and mentally. So preventing

this problems

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this problem

these problems

is depending on every family

members

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member

especially parents and

also

government

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the government

.

Firstly

have to take into consideration to children rather than work or daily problems. It would be asking about their studying at school or how they spend the day.

Secondly government

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Secondly, government

should put some censorship and have to show only

family friends

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family, friends

or cartoon connecting with science and study. I would like to assert that television is worthwhile for some special educational programs.

However

, it is not a viable alternative for books at all