Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

Studies
have been showed
Suggestion
have shown
show
are showing
showed
that the acid production after consuming sweet foods could increase the risk of tooth decay. The line chart is
illustrating
Suggestion
illustrated
three different sweet foods and the acidity level of
mouth
environment after consuming them. Overall, it can be seen that the lowest
PH
in
mouth
happens around 5-10 minutes after eating all types of sweet foods
(
Accept space
(
Fruit, Can
sugar
and Honey).
In addition
, it is obvious that Honey is the healthiest
sugar
for teeth since it produces less acidic materials. Regarding Honey, it can be concluded that it makes
mouth
environment’s acidic levels to increase up to a
PH
of approximately 4.8 after 5-10 minutes and
then
starts to decrease steadily until it reaches back to the normal
PH
of
mouth
Suggestion
the mouth
, which is seven.
On the other hand
, Can
sugar
could increase
mouth’s
Suggestion
the mouth’s PH
PH
significantly to 3.5 in just 5 minutes. After that it starts to decrease.
However
, it keeps
mouths
Suggestion
mouthing
environment
Accept comma addition
environment, PH
PH
below 5.5 after almost 33minutes, which tooth decay could occur. Fruit sugars diagram, have the same pattern as Honey and Can
sugar
, but it makes the
mouth
to be in the acidic level at which tooth decay occurs, just for 20 minutes after the moment which is eaten.
Submitted by nicky nabavi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: