While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

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Recruitment is one of the difficult task for most of the organizations. It is believed that companies should focus personal interests of the candidates

instead

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on their education and

experience

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while hiring a new employee. I disagreed with

this

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statement with the

releavant

having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue

relevant

irrelevant

example.

Firstly

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employer

Suggestion

the employer

should always solicit for qualifications and

experience

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while hiring process. Having a good

experience

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in specific field not only make the person more

realiable

worthy of reliance or trust

reliable

also

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know the

responsiblities

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

to perform the jobs.

For example

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, if there is

requirement

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required

of IT professional, employer does not give them

traning

activity leading to skilled behavior

training

if they already have good

experience

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in their own field.

Thus

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, personal

experience

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does not give them benefit at all in job searching.

Secondly

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, personal interest is something related to own enjoyment and

also

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good to spend leisure time. Personal interest may not satisfy the employer in order to complete

specific job

Suggestion

a specific job

For instance

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, if

person

Suggestion

a person

the person

is more interested in cricket and applying job in

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

field. It may impact on their career as well as reduce the growth of

company

Suggestion

the company

a company

. In

this

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case, most of the time company suffers a lot.

Thus

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, employers always pay more attention on

experience

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rather than personal interest of the candidates. In conclusion, having a good education and

experience

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can only help to grow the organizations

Accept space

Personal hobby only helps to follow

passion

Suggestion

a passion

. Sometimes good

experience

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can give a chance to become scientist, astronaut.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

234 words

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While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Task 2: Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.