You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine. For someone to live with a family for 6 months and look after their 6 years old child. Write a letter to the parents. explain why you would like the job give details of why you should be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Dear sir or Madam,

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Helou, Hope my letter finds you in good health. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Miriam Medawar and I am an AUB graduate holding a degree in child education. I am writing

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in response to the publicity I saw in an Australian magazine. Please allow me to explain and elaborate on my request. As a start, let me shed the light on the fact that I am a person who loves children, and

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was the main reason why I have chosen my major.

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, I have worked during the past five years in Learn and Play nursery with kids

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between four and eight years old. I believe I am the person you are requesting,

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can be noticed with my bachelor and experience. I am sure I will be able to fulfil all the tasks needed regarding taking care of your six years old children.

On the other hand

, I used to live with my grandmother who passed away a month ago and

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I find myself lonely looking for a place to be my home.

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to all the above, I have heard a lot about Australia and would love to spend my free time discovering it, visiting its monuments and historical places to get to know the country more.

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, I am humbly requesting to meet you for an interview at your convenience. Please do not hesitate to contact me at 009613687175. Looking forward to hearing good news from your end. Gratefully yours, Miriam Helou

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

257 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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