The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
The bar charts illustrate that
computer
ownership
as a percentage
of the population in 2002 and 2010 and by level
of Add an article
the level
education
between 2002 and 2010.
Generally, it is noticed that the percentage
of computer
ownership
were
increasing gradually from 2002 to 2010. It is Change the verb form
was
also
clear that the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
ownership
by all education
had been increasing in 2002 and 2010 significantly.
For the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
ownership
, the percentage
in 2002 was 58% approximately. In contrast
, the percentage
in 2010 was around 78%. We can see the difference between 2002 and 2010 was 20%. Furthermore
, the percentage
in 2006 was near 65%. It shows the trend of computer
ownership
had been increasing gradually.
For the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
ownership
by education
level
, the level
of education
was directly proportional to the percentage
of computer
ownership
in 2002 and 2010. As the level
of education
is higher, the percentage
increased
. Wrong verb form
increases
Also
, the percentage
of computer
ownership
had been increasing sharply from 2002 to 2010.Submitted by jon on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, percentage, level, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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