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The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
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The bar charts illustrate that
computer
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ownership
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 as a
percentage
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 of the population in 2002 and 2010 and by
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level
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the level
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 of
education
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 between 2002 and 2010. Generally, it is noticed that the
percentage
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 of
computer
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ownership
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were
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 increasing gradually from 2002 to 2010. It is
also
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 clear that
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computer
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ownership
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 by all
education
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 had been increasing in 2002 and 2010 significantly. For
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computer
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ownership
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, the
percentage
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 in 2002 was 58% approximately.
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, the
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 in 2010 was around 78%. We can see the difference between 2002 and 2010 was 20%.
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, the
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 in 2006 was near 65%. It shows the trend of
computer
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ownership
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 had been increasing gradually. For
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computer
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ownership
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 by
education
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level
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, the
level
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 of
education
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 was directly proportional to the
percentage
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 of
computer
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ownership
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 in 2002 and 2010. As the
level
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 of
education
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 is higher, the
percentage
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increased
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.
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, the
percentage
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 of
computer
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ownership
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 had been increasing sharply from 2002 to 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, percentage, level, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • population demographics
  • educational attainment
  • disparities
  • technological advancement
  • digital divide
  • market penetration
  • socio-economic factors
  • predictive insights
  • statistical significance
  • longitudinal study
  • accessibility
  • affordability
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