You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear
Mr.
Brown,
I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter to formally thank you for Linking Words
remarkable
successful business meeting for Correct article usage
the remarkable
international
market, which we organized Add an article
the international
last
week at the Delta Hotel in Toronto.
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Accordingly
to the feedback given by guests, they all liked your warm well-coming service, facilities and especially the design of your building and overall finishing.
In spite of overall contentment with amenities, Add a comma
,Accordingly
although
the quantity of the food portion was great, Linking Words
but
most of the guests were dissatisfied with the quality of food. All of my business associates agreed on the fact that the meat was not probably cooked. One of a guest complained about having little stomach pain after eating lunch.
Taking into consideration Remove the conjunction
apply
above
said, we would appreciate it if you establish Correct article usage
the above
a
better control over the kitchen and cooking procedure. We Remove the article
apply
also
decided not to leave any negative feedback official by considering Linking Words
overall
service at the hotel. We hope that Correct article usage
the overall
this
was a simple misfortune, accident and you'll take Linking Words
this
matter carefully in future.
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Fatihfully
yours,
Ranbir SandhuCorrect your spelling
Faithfully
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,