You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear

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Brown, I am writing

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letter to formally thank you for

remarkable

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successful business meeting for

international

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market, which we organized

last

week at the Delta Hotel in Toronto.

Accordingly

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to the feedback given by guests, they all liked your warm well-coming service, facilities and especially the design of your building and overall finishing. In spite of overall contentment with amenities,

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the quantity of the food portion was great,

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most of the guests were dissatisfied with the quality of food. All of my business associates agreed on the fact that the meat was not probably cooked. One of a guest complained about having little stomach pain after eating lunch. Taking into consideration

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said, we would appreciate it if you establish

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better control over the kitchen and cooking procedure. We

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decided not to leave any negative feedback official by considering

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service at the hotel. We hope that

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was a simple misfortune, accident and you'll take

this

matter carefully in future.

Fatihfully

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Faithfully

yours, Ranbir Sandhu