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An increasing number of people decide to learn a foreign language. What is the most difficult part when learning a foreign language? How can the learner overcom these difficulties?

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Learning a foreign
languages
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language
 is a process of training and
encounting
a convincing explanation that reveals basic causes
accounting
encounter
 many difficulties. Not persistent, afraid to listen, to speak, not to have flexible learning methods and self-guilt about themselves are difficulties that interfere with learning a foreign
languagrs
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language
languages
.
Firstly
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, in any language, the biggest barrier is learning
vocabulary
Use synonyms
. Sometime you really want to say you thought, but you don't have enough words to describe them. Weak
vocabulary
Use synonyms
also
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 make you unable to hear anything foreigner say. Another reason is mispronounce. Many of you have the habit of reading foreign language
by
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of
 emotion, gradually becoming a habit and reading wrong but not knowing. You may know all of these words, but you won't hear them.
Secondly
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, there will be some solution to overcome these difficulties. You have to cultivate a lot of
vocabulary
Use synonyms
.
Everyday
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Every day
 you can learn 10-15 words and so on for a long time the
vocabulary
Use synonyms
 will increase significantly. By
then
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, you will not be afraid of not knowing what to say in conversations.
Beside
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Besides
, the correct pronunciation will help you hear better.
For example
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, watching many movies with subtitles, listening to US-UK music or talking with native speaker is
also
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good way
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a good way
 to practice pronunciation. In conclusion, nowadays, learning a foreign language will be very useful for future study or work. No matter how hard it is, please overcome it.
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