Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.

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It has been noticed that the leisure activities and
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has plunged in the recent decades. I believe that addiction to digital gadgets and the desire to acquire money-orientated opulence are the main reasons for
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, while
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in physical activities and loss of
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productivity are the significant effects. At the outset, there are two chief causes for the gradual diminishing of
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these days.
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the revolutionised digital era.
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revolution has transformed people into couch potatoes, as they spend
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number of hours in front of their laptops,
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, the internet and social media. So obviously the citizens become less interested in carrying out an activity apart from these.
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, in an aspiration to achieve materialistically prosperous, they extend their working hours thereby cutting down the
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spent on
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.
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, my uncle who has been a passionate cyclist for years hardly does cycling after being placed in one of the top multinational companies. Incidentally, the above reasons have detrimental effects on the masses. The most significant impact on the individuals is the diminution in
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physical actions.
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leads an individual to an unbalanced lifestyle; thereby making them the victims of diseases like high blood pressure, obesity, high cholesterol and heart attacks.
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is because of the deposition of fats in the body which might naturally cause obesity after a period of
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. Another associated consequence is the loss of efficiency in the place of
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. It is wisely said that “all
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and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Refraining from participating in
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invariably affects a person’s performance at
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because after a certain point they just can’t handle the stress
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. To conclude, the evident reasons for people
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not be actively involved in pursuing pastime activities are undeniably practical in nature. Considering the worrying consequences of it, I am of the firm opinion that it is important that everyone allocates
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for the
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that interests them.
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can help them lead a stress-free and healthy life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Devote time
  • Hobbies
  • Nowadays
  • Busy
  • Fast-paced
  • Lifestyles
  • Work and career
  • Technology
  • Digital entertainment
  • Limited
  • Free time
  • Lack of motivation
  • Mental wellbeing
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Decreased
  • Social interactions
  • Creativity
  • Self-expression
  • Negative effects
  • Society
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