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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Friendship is an essential relationship of human. There are several ways of making a new
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 in the contemporary world. It can be continued for a longer time in order to get the benefits. Nowadays, The information technology has developed a lot compared with old decades. The IT sector has explored the social networking websites and
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 groups where people can make a new
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 through
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 cyberspace. Certainly, There are advantages and disadvantages of
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 new system.
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, People has not had an opportunity to meet the
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 physically and possible to continue the friendship until their life.
Secondly
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, They are a some group of people has maintained fake accounts for certain reasons.
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, People have not understood their characters at all.
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, It might be ended with upheaval. There are a certain good quality
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 benefited through
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 networking system
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 as Time saving, Country to country
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, and Disconnect the proxy
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 account. Talking about face to face Interaction is an entailing event for people. It develops a real friendship and improves a better understanding between friends. Even though, People come to know through the social networking websites and
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 groups
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 as Facebook, Whatsapp and Instagram etc. All of these friends must be diverted as direct friendship after a certain period in order to understand each other.In my opinion, People can be identified a new
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 through the cyberspace, but after a certain period they could be met physically to know their real characters. In conclusion, People should not be believed the social site friends based on
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 because it leads to problems as well. They must be monitored in their social activities regularly.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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