The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts below illustrate the average
rate
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of three types of
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nutrients
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in daily meals. As shown in the pie charts, the highest
rate
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of nutrient consumption
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a dinner is for
Sodium
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each day,
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the lowest expenditure is for the same nutrient in breakfast. As the charts show, the
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of added sugars is the same as saturated fat in breakfast with an amount of 16%,
whereas
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more saturated fat is gained in dinner in comparison with added sugars in the same meal with the
rate
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of 37% and 23% respectively.
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, more utilization is shown for saturated fat than added
sugar
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at lunchtime with a
rate
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of 26% and 19%.
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, added
sugar
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usage in snacks has a double
rate
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(42%) in collation with saturated fat, with a 21 %
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. The lowest
rate
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of
nutrients
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in snacks is for
Sodium
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, with a
rate
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of 14%,
while
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we have the highest
rate
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of added
sugar
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among
nutrients
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in snacks with a
rate
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of 42%. The usage of
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in lunch is 10% higher than added
sugar
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in the same dish with a
rate
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of 29% and 19%, respectively.
Also
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,
Sodium
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has the highest
rate
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of expenditure in dinner among
nutrients
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with a
rate
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of 43%, which is almost twice the
rate
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of added
sugar
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consumption in the same meal with a
rate
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of 23%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, nutrients, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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