Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertisement
is not only about appearance of Suggestion
The advertisement
An advertisement
product's
visual but Suggestion
the product's
a product's
also
about how to move people's preference to use our product
. There is a view recently, that the good sale number of famous products reflect
the power of advertising and the real needs of the community is not Suggestion
reflects
priority
anymore. In my opinion, I completely disagree with Suggestion
a priority
this
point of view.
First
of all, it is a common knowledge that in economic prinsip
, production number follows the quantity of demand. If we try to understand a basic generalization that is accepted as true and that can be used as a basis for reasoning or conduct
principle
this
statement in detail, it is not only about the power of advertisement but
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advertisement, but
also
the needed amount of the product
itself as a main reason why the purchasing value
is higher. For instance
, an indie brand or local brand could sell a certain number of the consumer goods without a ton of advertising in mass media or using pricey model
. It proofed that a main factor of selling a Suggestion
a pricey model
the pricey model
comodity
is not about advertising only.
articles of commerce
commodity
Secondly
, nowadays the main reason people buy things do not depend on the needed but
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needed, but
with
the Suggestion
to
value
of the product
. Producers is
more creative recently by adding additional Suggestion
are
have been
value
to the craft they made so that consumers want to pay for it. In example
, I invest my money to get clothes from a marginal local brand because by buying them I contribute to help a local tailor. In Suggestion
the example
this
case, I buy that things
because of its Suggestion
thing
value
and it does not relate with
the advertisement.
In conclusion, a high sale Suggestion
to
is not only reflect
about the Suggestion
is not only reflecting
is not only reflected
has not only reflected
strenght
of the property of being physically or mentally strong
strength
advertisement but
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advertisement, but
also
there are some other influencing factors.Submitted by [email protected] on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite