There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about a problem faced by bus
service Correct article usage
the bus
from
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for
last
several months.I am a local resident of Galt downtown and I work in Waterloo. Correct article usage
the last
Therefore
, I have totally depended upon bus
transportation as I don't have a car.
Firstly
, My job starts at 8 AM so I need to catch up early morning bus
which is at 6:00 AM. However
, most of the time this
bus
is late by 15 to 20 minutes.Although
, it's already been late bus
driver wait for a few of his friends as they are also
coming daily on this
bus
.It's sounds
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It sounds
me
like fake nepotism.Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, they're
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their
enormous
amount of local people depends Correct article usage
an enormous
upon
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on
this
bus
.So in my point of view, this
single morning bus
is not enough to provide transportation.Lastly
, in the evening time when I take bus
nearby from my office is totally in bad condition as air conditioning is not working and it's making horrible sounds while on highway
.
Here, I would like to suggest some solution over Add an article
the highway
problem
as a member of season pass of GRT Add an article
the problem
a problem
bus
service.Firstly
, I would be grateful to you if you could convey some time management skills and some manners to your drivers.Moreover
, few more options of bus
in the morning and Add an article
the bus
a bus
also
some new buses will be making significant improvement in GRT bus
services.
Waiting for your prompt and immediate attention to this
matters
.
Yours faithfully
Jineshkumar PatelFix the agreement mistake
matter
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite