There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter

#bus #service #reliability #area #two #weeks #manager #company

Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter to complain about a problem faced by

bus

Correct article usage

the bus

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service

from

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for

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last

Correct article usage

the last

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several months.I am a local resident of Galt downtown and I work in Waterloo.

Therefore

, I have totally depended upon

bus

transportation as I don't have a car.

Firstly

, My job starts at 8 AM so I need to catch up early morning

bus

which is at 6:00 AM.

However

, most of the time

this

bus

is late by 15 to 20 minutes.

Although

, it's already been late

bus

driver wait for a few of his friends as they are

also

coming daily on

this

bus

It's sounds

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It sounds

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Correct pronoun usage

apply

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like fake nepotism.

Secondly

they're

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their

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enormous

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an enormous

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amount of local people depends

upon

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this

bus

.So in my point of view,

this

single morning

bus

is not enough to provide transportation.

Lastly

, in the evening time when I take

bus

nearby from my office is totally in bad condition as air conditioning is not working and it's making horrible sounds while on

highway

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the highway

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. Here, I would like to suggest some solution over

problem

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the problem

a problem

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as a member of season pass of GRT

bus

service.

Firstly

, I would be grateful to you if you could convey some time management skills and some manners to your drivers.

Moreover

, few more options of

bus

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the bus

a bus

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in the morning and

also

some new buses will be making significant improvement in GRT

bus

services. Waiting for your prompt and immediate attention to

this

matters

Fix the agreement mistake

matter

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. Yours faithfully Jineshkumar Patel

Submitted by Jineshkumar Patel on Fri Jul 03 2020

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

240 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

government should spent more money roads on railways than roads what do you think about this?

You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend's job. Write a letter to your friend and say -Describe an article and its content, explain why it is good for you, why would it be helpful for your friend?

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