Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

Traditionally, women feel a sense of obligation towards nurturing and upbringing children in a family. In contemporary society, parents often share the responsibilities of parenting equally to raise their children who will become as a good citizen in the future.

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, I strongly agree that fatherhood should be highly accentuated because of the all-round

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of the children.

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of all, the lovely and emotional experience of

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parents

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a profound effect on the

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of a child. With unconditional love, mothers could contribute to the

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of children’s feelings, sentiment and communication and social skills, but by participating in games and outdoor activities, fathers could impart knowledge, experience and problem-solving skills

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, children could be well-rounded, being knowledgeable and having a varied social life when they grow up.

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of all, the financial support of parents acts as a catalyst for bringing the children up. In modern society, because of the high living expense,

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parents often have to work in order to afford for the needs of the children

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as food, clothes, and education.

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,

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father and mother usually share their tasks and daily duties in earning money, that allows their children to receive an adequate education as well as a good health care service.

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, the decision of having babies should be made by

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parents jointly, and

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should upbringing their children equally. Because child-rearing together could be good for physical, mental and psychological terms of the children.

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, the children who feel the absence of a parent are likely to be affected in a negative way, despite

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today, many

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parents

might raise their children successfully, it is the best for children to be under

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parents’ care. In conclusion. I completely believe that

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motherhood and fatherhood play an equal role

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of children.

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, they should share the daily duties and take care of their children together.