You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
with regard to your advertisement in one of the Australian magazine for the position of baby-sitter
to look after your Correct your spelling
babysitter
six-year old
kid.
Add a hyphen
six-year-old
This
job is of particular interest as I am great with kids, and also
I could render support to my family on financial grounds. Being the eldest daughter in my family, I have nurtured seven of my younger siblings for several years. Furthermore
, this
opportunity would help me recuperate from my recent losses.
During my college years, I have done part-time Correct your spelling
babysitting
baby sitting
in my neighbourhood vicinity. Recently, I had Correct your spelling
babysitting
baccalaureate
in childcare from the Correct article usage
a baccalaureate
university
of Toronto, and have a valid license for Change the capitalization
University
this
job. While waiting for your response, I shall reach out to my earlier clients for recommendation letters which
could aid you in the Correct pronoun usage
that
decision making
process.
Add a hyphen
decision-making
Although
I would be spending the majority of my hour to take
care of your kid, during leisure time I would like to read, visit Change the verb form
taking
Add an article
the museum
a museum
museum
and other architectural wonders. Rather Fix the agreement mistake
museums
indulging
in these activities alone, provided permission I would love to take the younger one to nearby libraries, Change preposition
than indulging
Add an article
a museum
the museum
museum
to teach new information and help to channelize the thought process.
I would be grateful if I could hear you at your earliest possible convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Subbu Arumugam GandhiFix the agreement mistake
museums
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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