Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Different people contain varied opinion about the
job
and its allied benefits. A section of them
prefer
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prefers
to enjoy deep
content
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contentment
and peace of mind in the
work
they are doing while rest others consider
fixed
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a fixed job
job
for their long term monetary and other allied benefits. In my opinion, long lasting
job
should be opted for the
security
of
life
and family. I believe that permanent position at the
work
a place where work is done
workplace
place
in today’s competitive world, signifies the most. A
person
contributes a long span of time in grasping education for achieving his or her dream
job
. Not only
this
, but
also
their parents compromise a lot by cutting down their spending on their wishes for the sake of their children's future. Lifetime
security
of
work
provides them a sense of financial
security
and stress free
life
in the contemporary age
of throat cut
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of cut throat
competition. With
this
benefit, a
person
can make a long term plan for investing money due to
regular flow
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a regular flow
of income and
able
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ability
abilities
to live
life
without any financial burden.
For example
, stable income maintains the joy and happiness in one's family and
life
. On
other hand
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the other hand
, a section of
people
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people, places
people places
place
satisfaction in the
work
on the top priority rather than glue them on the one position. They argue for enjoying the
job
and
work
instead
of compromising their pleasure for maintaining
security
of
job
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jobs
a job
.
Furthermore
, they opine that successful professional carrier brings positive impact on their personal arena.
Consequently
, a
person
can be contended even without
security
at the
work
place
,
Accept space
,
if he or she enjoys what he does.
For example
, hectic schedule along with heavy load of
work
,
Accept space
,
unable
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Unable
to deprive the happiness from a
person
who is satisfied from his or her
place
of
work
. To sum up,
although
job
satisfaction remains a crucial part in one's professional carrier,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
suppose
security
of occupation is the utmost significant factor for living
life
without facing any financial burden and stress. Certainly, if
future
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the future
is secure, there is no way to look back.
Submitted by Shweta Pawar on

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