The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The real-life interaction is depleted by the emerge of social media among today’s people. From my experience,

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there are evident advantages of having the Internet society, the drawbacks of lacking in

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the actual person's relationship

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outweigh the benefits of using the online platforms. There are mainly two benefits from communicating via the social media. The

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one is people can always stay

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connected

to each other no matter how far they are. In the current scenario, international connections are reachable in most of the population, and

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the opportunities of having oversees friends are high.

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, these platforms will be

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able to keep us

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possible advantage is people can widen their perspectives by exchanging ideas with

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a wider range

of people. On the Internet, there have been open sources available for the public to state their notions and comment their opinions which are good ways to stay updated.

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, the drawbacks are immense. The

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drawback is that the relationship of people acquainting from the online conversation is unreliable. Due to the differences of social identities, each online account only allows little background information to be shown on their status, which make the criminals easier to beguile the victims. The financial thieves,

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, target users that are interested in making money and promote themselves in the social media by introducing intriguing,

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, false information to the timeline. In fact,

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amounts of money have been wasted to the online robberies, and they are generally elusive as they create fake identities enclosing their true ones. The

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disadvantage is having lower ability to start conversations with actual people. There are many typical cases of romantic

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couples, which

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conversation fluently on the online chat box,

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, in reality, they

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are hardly talking

hardly talk

have hardly talked

to each other when they meet in

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the flesh

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,

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of people spend the majority of time sliding and searching the contents

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the social media

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of interacting with their surrounded friends or families.

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, they usually develop low socializing skills and friendly personalities. To sum up,

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the social media make us connect with the entire virtual world, they would drop our capabilities of socializing and increase the chance to experience the fake information. From all of the reasons, the disadvantages of using social media outweigh the advantages.