In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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The illustration shows the production of
electricity
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from geothermal energy using cold
water
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as input.
This
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process happens in 5 major steps, starting with pumping cool
water
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into the ground and producing
electricity
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using
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turbine
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a turbine
turbines
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, the cold
water
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is pumped into the injection well, which is 4.5km below the earth’s surface.
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the
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is injected into the geothermal zone, containing hot rocks, which heats up the
water
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and passes it to the production well. After the
water
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is heated, the hot
water
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is sent from
production
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the production
a production
well to the condenser above the earth’s surface using a pump.
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, the condenser separates the hot
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and the steam into two different channels, the steam is
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passed on to the
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with high pressure,
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pressure powers the
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. As the
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and the generator are coupled,
electricity
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is produced. At the ending the
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is distributed to
surrounding area
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the surrounding area
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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