In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Trains are considered as
most reliable source
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the most reliable source
of transportation apart from often irregular and slow bus and expensive flights
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It is thought by
few people
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a few people
that, there is the
requirement
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Requirement
of
fastest
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the fastest
running trains in between the cities by Spending a major economy
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while it is opposed by others to transfer
this
sum of money in repairing and modifying the public transport which exists. Views about both the parties are discussed
further
. The construction of speedy trains is a need as well as a step towards modernization by adapting new technologies for making human lives easier
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These trains will
reduce
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Reduce
time and will save from
long tiresome
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long, tiresome
journeys. As in case.
if
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If
someone from the family is living in adjacent city which takes two hours at present, but will get reduced to half hour or forty five minutes
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
they will
abb
spatially or metaphorically from a lower to a higher position
up
to come home
everyday
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every day
,
Another
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Other
,
benefit
financial assistance in time of need
Benefit
will be safety like alone long travelling is a threat to a person
from
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of
theft
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rape or even injury,
this
will be reduced as time between departure and
aviral
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a viral
of destination will be reduced. The trains will not be cheap but affordable than fights and more reliable than
bus
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buses
the bus
or self car drive.
In contrast
, the economical as well as land and labour loss can be saved and transferred in
impoovenment
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the improvement
improvement
of frequency of bus and construction of trains connecting
even
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Even
remorse area of the cities
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This
will help the local people with daily transportation and will save them. Some sleep for early morning as well as late night workers.
However
, due to cost-effective public transport
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people
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People
will lessen their use of private vehicle
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which will
reduced
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reduce
traffic and pollution. To Conclude, My opinion after discussing both the
sides is it is
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sides, it is
sides it is
convincent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
convincing
and better to introduce fast trains for connecting cities than frequently spending on improving already working public transportation
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