In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Real life professioal experience
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The real life professional experience
Real life professional experience
is much
appreaciated
fully understood or grasped
appreciated
than crammed bookish knowledge.
Although
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, in
this
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generation there are a lot of toppers, but hardly can any topper put their mind to hands
for
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to
use. Due to
such
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changing trend, it is agreed that practical
compentence
the quality of being adequately or well qualified physically and intellectually
competence
achievers are more regarded compared to fluent book theory speakers. So,
future
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the future
may hold just interviews on skills for
job
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a job
the job
jobs
without
marksheets
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mark sheets
or any
study
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student
records. Both the views are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. Skills are to be developed, not written in any
book but
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book, but
needs a lot of practise to become the master of that skill. As a lawyer after completing the LLB graduation, will need to fight a case to know which laws fall
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the place in real life scenario. Those who learn from books and practise in mind are the who never
faceses
the front of the human head from the forehead to the chin and ear to ear
faces
the reality of
live
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life
living
, because books are generalized, written on the
authors
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authors'
author's
experience and future
prespective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
perspectives
. But
future
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the future
is always receptive, one never knows when the situation
chnages
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
changes
. So, it is not necessary that what is written is our bible, full of truth. In case, doctor while
persuing
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
pursuing
medicine, knows that brachial artery can be
deteced
perceived or discerned
detected
detached
in the front of the arm, but when the time comes to withdraw blood with injection, the chances to rupturing adjoining views increases, as exact location needs to be hunted for every individual, which involves
practise
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practising
, patience and a lot of failures.
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, it is frequently quoted that, failure is the key to success, but how many times is never mentioned, so people assume it as one time and leave it to bad fortune. These failures help
person
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people
a person
the person
persons
grow step by step, as once a mistake
done
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done, then
then
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they will never follow
same path
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the same path
to result again and will try until
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
achieved. These are the benefits of skills, as it amplifies the persons
hardwork
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hard work
behind it and is much
appreaciated
fully understood or grasped
appreciated
. One of the best example is, millionaire warren buffet, he started investing is share market since he was 16 years, by his pocket money. Today, he handles others money in share market.
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, the knowledge of
book
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the book
books
is always underrated
comparing
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compared
with people with skills, but there are live examples of people flouring with their knowledge. One of the many examples
are
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is
teachers and professors, they learnt and are sharing it with the students.
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