In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Real life professioal experience

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The real life professional experience

Real life professional experience

is much

appreaciated

fully understood or grasped

appreciated

than crammed bookish knowledge.

Although

, in

this

generation there are a lot of toppers, but hardly can any topper put their mind to hands

for

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use. Due to

such

changing trend, it is agreed that practical

compentence

the quality of being adequately or well qualified physically and intellectually

competence

achievers are more regarded compared to fluent book theory speakers. So,

future

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the future

may hold just interviews on skills for

job

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a job

the job

jobs

without

marksheets

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mark sheets

or any

study

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student

records. Both the views are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. Skills are to be developed, not written in any

book but

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book, but

needs a lot of practise to become the master of that skill. As a lawyer after completing the LLB graduation, will need to fight a case to know which laws fall

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

the place in real life scenario. Those who learn from books and practise in mind are the who never

faceses

the front of the human head from the forehead to the chin and ear to ear

faces

the reality of

live

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life

living

, because books are generalized, written on the

authors

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authors'

author's

experience and future

prespective

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

perspective

perspectives

. But

future

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the future

is always receptive, one never knows when the situation

chnages

cause to change; make different; cause a transformation

changes

. So, it is not necessary that what is written is our bible, full of truth. In case, doctor while

persuing

following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit

pursuing

medicine, knows that brachial artery can be

deteced

perceived or discerned

detected

detached

in the front of the arm, but when the time comes to withdraw blood with injection, the chances to rupturing adjoining views increases, as exact location needs to be hunted for every individual, which involves

practise

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practising

, patience and a lot of failures.

Although

, it is frequently quoted that, failure is the key to success, but how many times is never mentioned, so people assume it as one time and leave it to bad fortune. These failures help

person

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people

a person

the person

persons

grow step by step, as once a mistake

done

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done, then

then

they will never follow

same path

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the same path

to result again and will try until

sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

successes

achieved. These are the benefits of skills, as it amplifies the persons

hardwork

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hard work

behind it and is much

appreaciated

fully understood or grasped

appreciated

. One of the best example is, millionaire warren buffet, he started investing is share market since he was 16 years, by his pocket money. Today, he handles others money in share market.

In contrast

, the knowledge of

book

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the book

books

is always underrated

comparing

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compared

with people with skills, but there are live examples of people flouring with their knowledge. One of the many examples

are

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teachers and professors, they learnt and are sharing it with the students.

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