The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourage people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is obvious,

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connection helps us be in touch with our friends and relatives easily and

cheaper but

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cheaper, but

negatively affecting on socializing and individualism, has been mentioned.

to

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To

a certain extend

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might have disadvantages on social life and

characteristics whereas

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characteristics, whereas

it should be utilized in an appropriate manner in order to have more positive functions. Certainly, it can be inevitably seen that the problem has

risen

come into existence; take on form or shape

arisen

due to the improper and

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indiscipline acts

of users themselves. Nowadays playing virtual games and online talking have become popular. Almost, everybody

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has

their own mobile phone, and they can use it for online gaming, chatting or browsing. With all the attractive and entertaining applications, many people like to play around with their gadget for hours and abandon their social life.

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, many families are having communication problems these days due to they have less time for an eye to eye contact with other family members. Anyway, except all mentioned problems,

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connection has made connecting with our siblings who are living far from us available.

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Several

years ago, if family members were not lucky enough to accommodate in a same area, they would not have the chance of seeing each other many times. By use of

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adorable innovation, lots of applications have been designed which make people able to make video calls and see their family members.

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Students

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, who have gone abroad can share their daily life in their new hometown with their parents to ensure them everything is fine.

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, making a voice call is lower cost compared to making a normal phone call without the

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. Clearly the cheaper the better, and more people try to use it

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of traditional connecting ways. In short

,

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,

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internet

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the internet

can limit our present relationships in

real world

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the real world

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of not having a certain plan for it

,

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,

it could have merits for a lot of people like international students or people who want to reduce their cost of living by replacing old ways of making a phone call with voice calls

.

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