In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

As

population

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populations

the population

around the globe is on the

rise there are many

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rise, there are many

challenges faced by

majority

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the majority

a majority

of countries to facilitate

huge number

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the huge number

a huge number

of people in case of food, health, security etc.

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, the environmental challenges being faced when it comes to constructing new places to live is the most significant one. Nowadays, the primary issue concerning the authorities is deforestation, which is in turn, adversely affecting the scenic beauty of rural areas and

environment

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the environment

of the whole region.

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, to develop suburb in outer parts of

city

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the city

a city

which is home to many cattle farms and farmers. It will lead to the migration of those farmers and livestock animals.

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, in those home

conditions many

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conditions, many

farmers are well known of

fertility

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the fertility

of the

soil but

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soil, but

at

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in

new place weather conditions and productivity of land is unknown to farmers.

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, many products which grow in outskirts of city their mass production will eventually fall and all the dairy products which come from those cattle farms their provision will gradually decrease. Which will lead their prices to skyrocket.

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,

this

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may become cause to import of those goods and items which will not be locally available.

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, it will increase

burden

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the burden

of pockets of the country.

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, to increase

number

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the number

of houses for increasing population there can be

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

possible way which

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possible way in which

many countries are following. To illustrate, many shopping malls, supermarkets, warehouses,

theaters

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatres

, cinemas and libraries in Japan are underground because public places like these don’t require much natural light. And according to a

report 90

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report, 90

percent of

population

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the population

of Japan will be squeezed in only 20 percent of

area

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the area

and

that is

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only possible because of

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invention. Which will provide countries with an immediate solution to counter

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growing issue and will

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emphasize on building of a modern infrastructure. In short, undoubtedly, there are numerous possible ways other than construction in

countryside

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the countryside

which may significantly affect a number of being living out there. We should be looking for a more modern mechanism which can actually cost us less than worsening of

spectacular beauty

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the spectacular beauty

of

rural areas

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the rural areas

.