Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leaver in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face younger generation today?

In the present era of political instabilities and social unrests, the
youth
unemployment is worrying challenges for all of us. I strongly agree with the argument,
however
, there are various leading problems as equally important as
younger generation's Jobless issues
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the younger generation's Jobless issues
. The purpose of
this
essay Is
two-fold
twice as great or many
twofold
that to illustrate why the younger generation's joblessness is important, and to explain other problematic issues faced us. In the
first
place, as far as the function of an o
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patton
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Patton
Is concerned, the
youth
unemployment is
serious problem
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a serious problem
in that it cannot move forward young
people
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person's
life
and might ruin their economic prospects. By working, people not only achieving the lifetime
goals but
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goals, but
also
earning living costs.
However
, the uneducated people hard to get a satisfactory job, compared to people with a degree from
teritary
coming next after the second and just before the fourth in position
tertiary
territory
schools.
This
is because, we are in the trend of hiring people who equipped with specialised skills and professional knowledge. Apart from the joblessness issues, there are divergent problems we should
dealt
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deal
with. Foremost among these to perhaps the issue of the overpopulation. By advanced treatments and cutting edge technologies, lifespan is extended than before, on the flip side, the
child birth
the parturition process in human beings; having a baby; the process of giving birth to a child
childbirth
is decreased.
As a result
,
younger generation
Suggestion
the younger generation
should pay more taxes, and work longer hours to support the older generations. From the perspective of
tax-payer
someone who pays taxes
taxpayers
,
this
policy regard as unfair
legeal
established by or founded upon law or official or accepted rules
legal
action,
additionally
, the extreme complexion of
this
circumstance is
brain- drain phenomenon
Suggestion
a brain - drain phenomenon
, which is
youth
leaves their country that
impose
Suggestion
imposes
high taxes on their free will. From the view of the ministry, it should handle with serious matters due to the human workforce and taxation is the fundamental elements of the country. On the flip side, there are still problematic issues that threat to someone's
life
,
such
as, alarmingly high level of trash, famine, outbreak of disease in developing countries. It is impossible to deal with,
this
is because, the complex matters in a tangle comprised of countless factors, including civil wars, corruptions of man in the power, or political instabilities.
However
, those problems are
danger
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dangerous
to the
life
in addition
to living,
thus
we should handle these urgently. In conclusion, I agree with the
youth
Joblessness is a huge problem
to
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for
in
our community,
however
, we should remember that still out there have various issues that threat to population's
life
.
Consequently
, the government should nation
aids to
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aids, to
the developing countries, and
also
individuals should pay attention to these issues.
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