Big salary is more important than job satisfaction?

After graduating from college, life pushes us have to find the
job
. Especially for the newbie who enter the workforce. Some people think that big
salary
is more important than
job
satisfaction. I have two reasons to against
this
issue.
Firstly
, in my
opinion I
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opinion, I
think we have to accumulate
work
experience to improve productive capability and unique ability,
then
we can use these professional skills to negotiate the
salary
in the future.
Secondly
, the
job
with
big
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a big salary, maybe
a big salary maybe
salary
maybe is not suitable for your personality.
for
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For
example, I use to
work
in airport service
center
table consisting of a horizontal surface over which business is transacted
counter
.
This
job
is really a dream
job
for somebody. In the stereotype, apart from good
salary
, I don'
t
have to hard
work
like blue-collar workers. I just wear
uniform
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the uniform
a uniform
with beautiful makeup and answer the phone call in front desk. In fact, I have to receive different complaints and deal with them.
sometimes
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Sometimes
I have to apologize to customers for the fault doesn'
t
about me. To recollect the year I have worked
in
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at
the airport, I think I still can feel negative emotion.
Therefore
, through
this
work
experience I know I have to follow my heart to find the
job
which is tally with my personality. I believe as long as we can do our best in the
job
,
then
we don'
t
have to
worried
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worry
about we can'
t
deserve
big
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big salaries
a big salary
salary
in long time career.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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