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Smacking children to is the best method to discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Children are being punished a variety of ways by their parents has become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that an excellent way to punish them is by striking. I completely disagree with the above statement; if
this
 happens the child will
then
 show behavioural changes. On one hand, it is argued that smacking their
off springs
the immediate descendants of a person
offsprings
 is the supreme form to maintain discipline parents could give someone. They are worried that by not doing
so they
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so, they
 will lose control over their offspring who will
inturn
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in turn
 misbehave.
Furthermore
 will become even more of
problem
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the problem
a problem
 that if the child is not disciplined throughout his adulthood will be unhappy.
For
instance one
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instance, one
 newspaper article shows 21% of parents relent to corporal punishment to educate them to stop repetitive nature of bad moral which causes them to respect their parents.
This
 suggests why some resort to inflicting pain on children to reinforce good behaviour.
On the other hand
, to correct the bad conduct pain is used on them
thus
, demonstrating very aggressive behaviour.
Moreover
, they will have a flawed theory ingrained into their brain that hurting people is no big deal. When you smack
them they
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them, they
 can be seriously injured. To illustrate
further
 research paper says, due to corporal punishments pupil begin to exhibit criminal activities and have a tendency to become a juvenile delinquent in search of vengeance.
Consequently
, increase in juvenile crimes will be the ultimate result. People who believe that physical pain is the only way to get
thorough
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thoroughly
to
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into
 the minds of children have a flawed understanding of giving punishment and underestimate more dangerous outcomes.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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