write an narrative paragraph about a challenge/ experience that you have faced

Last
year, I had an unforgettable experience. It was
in
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a sunny morning, and I went to the beach with my friend. We started going to the beach in the early morning, 5AM. When we arrived, the sunrise was so amazing and the weather was good. After
took
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some beautiful photos, I and my friend went swimming. At
first
I did not dare to swim far because it was a deep one. While I was swimming and was enjoying the warm water, my foot was suddenly hurt. At that time, my mind was so scared, I tried to scream under the water but I could not. Everything was getting bad, I could not breath, I felt I was going to die. Right away, my friend ran to me and save me, she woke me up. She was totally shocked. Fortunately, I was safe. After that accident, I am being scared of the water. I try to be more careful when go to the beach and not to swim alone. It was an unforgettable memory in my life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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