You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#flight #airport #airline #addresses #sir #madam

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Danubia Juliao and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the

flight

CVC123 which left the U.S.A.

last

Sunday, having Vancouver as the final destination.

Firstly

, as it was an international

flight

I arrived 3 hours before my ticket time.

Nevertheless

, at the

last

minute, the airport announced that due to a problem in their system the information about the flights

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the monitors

were

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wrong.

Surprisely

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Surprisingly

, my

flight

actually was

departuring

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departing

from another gate, far from the one I was. The airport employees did not take any effort to help me and I missed the

flight

. After a lot of complaints and discussions, another

flight

was provided to me,

however

, the departure would be at the end of the

day.

This

situation brought me a lot of problems, as I was supposed to be in Vancouver on that Sunday to attend an important business meeting, as well as I had to pay for my hotel room and meals. I am expecting to have reimbursed all my financial losses, as well as to hear a good reason for

this

whole situation. I await your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Danubia Juliao

Submitted by danubiajuliao on Sat Jul 11 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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