People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

An ideal

society

where the human can

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

all their desires has not been accomplished

yet despite

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yet, despite

much

efforts

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effort

that have been made.

Therefore

, I tend to believe that

instead

of setting a high standard (*), we should build a

society

where moral values,

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equality

,

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and justice are highly respected. (**) In the

society

where its citizens love, support each other, and share both material and spiritual values, all of which

lead

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leads

to a wealthy and healthy lifestyle, the quantity of prison would be lower.

In other words

, humans could live in safety and grow up in ethical-educated condition,

therefore

, they would voluntarily take the responsibility for taking good care of their family and people around them.

This

would become the motivation for developing and enhancing many fields which play integral parts of

society

such

as

economy

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the economy

and education. (***)

Additionally

, the

society

that justice and equality are critically respected, there would be no discriminations

such

as sexism and racism, both are the most serious problems in our current world.

For instance

, George Floyd, a Negro, was killed by a police

officer

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officer, although

although

he said that he could not breathe when that white man knelt on his neck.

This

raised a protest storm in countries, leaving many consequences

such

as economic stagnation, death, and destruction

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.

Thus

, were citizens to want to live in peace and security, it would require them to make a joint effort in eradicating these issues and building a virtuous world. (*) Creating a

society

based on these standards would be hard, but it is possible. Beginning

from

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of

changing education that students should be educated to imply with moral standards rather than learning theoretical knowledge.

Also

, not only at school, parents ought to improve their lifestyle to become the paragon of virtue which children could follow, contributing to form their positive personality. (***) In conclusion, an ideal

society

should be created depend on justice and righteousness, from my perspective