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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduate get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some are of the opinion that the primary motive of higher
education
 is to
land
bestow a quality on
lend
 students with white collar jobs whilst others are fixated on limitless doors of opportunity that
education
 might open for them as well as for everyone.
This
 essay agrees that university
education
 has much higher horizons to meet rather than manufacturing employee.
This
 essay will discuss both views. It is true that university pass outs have
huge probability
Suggestion
a huge probability
 of landing at better jobs;
however
,
this
 does not necessarily mean that
education
 should be viewed as a tool for career success. Mostly because educated personnel find themselves being approached by renowned companies people tend to correlate
education
 with jobs. It is generally agreed that Harvard graduates are absorbed in the society just like a sponge absorbs water, but it does not mean that employer only look for degrees: they strive for excellence. University
education
 not only trains humans
for
Suggestion
to
work it
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work, it
also
 prepares them for adversity of life. Every
year thousands
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year, thousands
 of graduates are bid farewell thinking they would work their way through
world
Suggestion
the world
 and in turn make
this
 planet a better place for all. An educated person is a boon not only for his
family but
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family, but
also
 for the society he dwells. The living proof of
this
 can be visualized in the parliament of Canada, which consists of scholars in their respective field and
that is
 the main reason the country is at the zenith of success. In conclusion,
university
Suggestion
the university
 opens countless possibility to its graduates and better job-opportunity is just one of them.
Submitted by Bhesh Raj Verma on

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