Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take interest in art?

Despite the fact that

art

is a crucial part of

culture

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cultural

herigtage

practices that are handed down from the past by tradition

heritage

worldwide, the majority of people nowadays tend to gravitate towards fields like science,

tecnology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

and business. In my point of view, the underlying cause is the development of technology, but

this

problem can be gradually resolved by proper promotion. It is notable to mention that as computers and machineries are evolving each day,

art

can

noy

negation of a word or group of words

not

guarantee a stable career in the future. While the fields of science or business are highly respected in society provided that they come with good payment and great demand in human resource, artists are struggling to make ends meet.

Moreover

,

mordern

belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

modern

Modern

life seems to be moving at a faster rate, and people are becoming

more busier

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busier

than before. Many spend most of their days glued to electronic devices or deal with personal concerns, which left them with no time to learn or appreciate the beauty of

art

that normally

can not

can not

cannot

be perceived at

first

glance. Looking at the

brightside

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bright side

, there is a solution to the matter,

that is

to promote

art

by handing out scholarships or opening workshops for students interested in the field. By

this

measn

how a result is obtained or an end is achieved

means

mean

, more people will be inspired and take

art

seriously, and universities will have

higher successful rate

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a higher success rate

higher success rate

higher success rates

in recruiting those with

potential

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the potential

for their courses.

In addition

,

art

should be

further

advertised on social media.

Consequently

, the public may acknowledge the importance of

art

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artists

in life, so that they would set aside some of their time to

lear

gain knowledge or skills

learn

and appreciate it. In conclusion,

although

subjects

such

as science, technology and business are lucrative in terms of job prospects and drive

people

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peoples'

peoples

person's

attention away from

art

, better promotion will certainly help

this

industry regain its position in society.