Questions Human activities is damaging the Earth or making it a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree?

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Desire to move towards perfection has always been in human’s mind. They have tried to do same with

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earth

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the earth

and in

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the past, we

the past we

have

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seen slow or immediate outcomes of these steps. In

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essay we will discuss

outcomes both

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outcomes, both

aspects and

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I will share my opinion

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To begin

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with, after 1950’s

earth

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has seen vast industrialization on all parts of

earth

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, competition has been really tough for all countries to secure top position.

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has resulted in

high amount

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a high amount

of populations.

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, Ozone layer of

earth

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has a whole now due to high emissions of Carbon dioxide.

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, Due waste has polluted water resources of

earth

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. All these pollutions have resulted in loosing various species on

earth

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and water. Many

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animals

are about to get extinct.

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, all

this

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has resulted in

change

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changes

of weather cycle in various parts and rapid rise in natural disasters. Food cycle has

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been affected due to

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, Various NGOs and governments have taken various steps in damage control and even succeeded in some areas.

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, Various beaches in south Asia were full of plastics dumped by humans have been cleaned up to restore coral life.

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, several laws

has been passed

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have been passed

by lawmakers to secure environment and breathe fresh air. But, these steps were too

less according

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less, according

to damaged done and were taken to heal the environment again. To conclude, Humans have always harmed

earth

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and

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cured it, they haven’t done anything that would make it better than it was naturally. So, It can be concluded that

earth

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Best gift

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a Best gift

a best gift

the Best gift

of God to mankind and they have only destroyed it by its activities. Humans should try to keep it in original form.

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