Questions Human activities is damaging the Earth or making it a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree?

Desire to move towards perfection has always been in human’s mind. They have tried to do same with
earth
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the earth
and in
past we
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the past, we
the past we
have
also
seen slow or immediate outcomes of these steps. In
this
essay we will discuss
outcomes both
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outcomes, both
aspects and
then
I will share my opinion
also
.
To begin
with, after 1950’s
earth
has seen vast industrialization on all parts of
earth
, competition has been really tough for all countries to secure top position.
This
has resulted in
high amount
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a high amount
of populations.
For instance
, Ozone layer of
earth
has a whole now due to high emissions of Carbon dioxide.
Secondly
, Due waste has polluted water resources of
earth
. All these pollutions have resulted in loosing various species on
earth
and water. Many
animal
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animals
are about to get extinct.
Moreover
, all
this
has resulted in
change
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changes
of weather cycle in various parts and rapid rise in natural disasters. Food cycle has
also
been affected due to
this
.
On the other hand
, Various NGOs and governments have taken various steps in damage control and even succeeded in some areas.
For example
, Various beaches in south Asia were full of plastics dumped by humans have been cleaned up to restore coral life.
Additionally
, several laws
has been passed
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have been passed
by lawmakers to secure environment and breathe fresh air. But, these steps were too
less according
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less, according
to damaged done and were taken to heal the environment again. To conclude, Humans have always harmed
earth
and
then
cured it, they haven’t done anything that would make it better than it was naturally. So, It can be concluded that
earth
as
Best gift
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a Best gift
a best gift
the Best gift
of God to mankind and they have only destroyed it by its activities. Humans should try to keep it in original form.
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