You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear Sir, G. Roberts I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with one new washing machine that I bought two weeks ago in your

shop

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. After purchasing the SanG 3500 at your

shop

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, it was sent to my house three days later. At the moment that I received it, the specialist sent by you helped me to connect it properly, and

apparently

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it was working well. But after a week it stopped working, it didn't turn on when I pressed the button.

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The next

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day I called your

shop

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and explained the situation. I was told that a technician was going to be sent in order to check the washing machine as

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soon

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son

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as possible.

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nobody has been sent so far and all that was four days ago. I was checking my purchase warranty and according to the policies of your

shop

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, I have the right of a full refund if the washing machine fails during the

first

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three months.

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to resolve

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problem I would appreciate

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a full refund for my

purchasing

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purchase

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Otherwise

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I will take legal

actions

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about

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against

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this

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situation. Yours faithfully Cho Irgit

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

189 words

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