You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to request your approval to attend a ‘

sales

maximization’

course

. I believe

this

training will be beneficial to my new position as a team leader in the

sales

department.

This

is a three days

course

and it will be hosting top

sales

professionals in the field. They will discuss the different strategies to increase

sales

and motivate subordinates.

Also

, they will focus on the techniques used to double

sales

through social media networks. The training session will be held

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8 AM till 5 PM,

therefore

, I would like to request a day release to be able to attend the

course

. I will delete my duties to my assistant ‘James’. He is a very well trained and responsible person. I will check my emails every day, and I will

also

be available for any urgent calls. There are many benefits of

this

course

Firstly

, it helps to better broaden my concepts in

sales

Secondly

, new effective selling techniques can be adopted to increase profits.

Finally

, the

course

will be helpful as our company’s

sales

strategy is shifting to the internet. I look forward to receiving your positive reply, Yours faithfully, Bishoy Yousef

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

201 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

professional advancement
cross-cultural collaboration
headquarters/ head office
global perspective
remote work
temporary assignment
team dynamics
networking opportunities
cultural immersion
succession planning
collaborative tools
time zone coordination
corporate hierarchy
relocation logistics
work-life balance
multinational environment

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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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