The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The shipping jam is one of the most serious problems and
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the most effective solution for
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issue is provided free use of public shipping regardless
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suggestion, I am more convinced that public transit should not be used without any charge. On the one hand, some
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consider that
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of public shipment is the greatest way
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the following reasons. Talking about the first reason, the main cause of the establishment of
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congestion is private
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, Viet Nam, which contains a huge number of personal
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users, often
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from massive congestion. If everybody stops using their own cars or motorcycles in order to
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in free public services, the rate of
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can be considerably decreased.
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, I strongly disagree with
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a number of grounds. First of all, the governments need to spend a huge amount of money to make free public happiness, the government fund is not unlimited, so if they concentrate on investing in
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field, other essential factors are gonna be overlooked and underestimated.
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, there are millions of public
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in one country, so
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government funding is going to
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out in a
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period of time.
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,
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tend to use free products so if free public shipment actually exists, there
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gonna be an enormous number of users, which
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to over-using and many other serious problems
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, my hometown swimming pool used to be free to use,
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, now it is not free anymore because it is too crowded and often receive reports of the disappearance of costumers items and the pool facilities, so I do not encourage the appearance of the free public ass wonderful system. In conclusion, some
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believe that the governments should provide free public shipment meanwhile other groups do not think
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