The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The shipping jam is one of the most serious problems and

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the most effective solution for

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issue is provided free use of public shipping regardless

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this

suggestion, I am more convinced that public transit should not be used without any charge. On the one hand, some

people

consider that

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of public shipment is the greatest way

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the following reasons. Talking about the first reason, the main cause of the establishment of

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congestion is private

transportations

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transportation

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.

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, Viet Nam, which contains a huge number of personal

transportations

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users, often

suffer

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from massive congestion. If everybody stops using their own cars or motorcycles in order to

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in free public services, the rate of

jam

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can be considerably decreased.

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, I strongly disagree with

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statement

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a number of grounds. First of all, the governments need to spend a huge amount of money to make free public happiness, the government fund is not unlimited, so if they concentrate on investing in

this

field, other essential factors are gonna be overlooked and underestimated.

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, there are millions of public

transports

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in one country, so

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the

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government funding is going to

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out in a

small

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period of time.

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,

people

tend to use free products so if free public shipment actually exists, there

are

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gonna be an enormous number of users, which

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to over-using and many other serious problems

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as thieves.

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, my hometown swimming pool used to be free to use,

however

, now it is not free anymore because it is too crowded and often receive reports of the disappearance of costumers items and the pool facilities, so I do not encourage the appearance of the free public ass wonderful system. In conclusion, some

people

believe that the governments should provide free public shipment meanwhile other groups do not think

this

is a positive alteration. In my view, I firmly disagree with

this

view.