Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

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violence

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. To sum up, after a careful analysis of both point views, I concur that

violence

in shows or games has no damaging in the society. But

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recommend that the local government should put some measure and laws to combat bad effects.